|Hi, I'm here today, to speak about the doujinshi's birth. As probably some of you know, if you read page page 31 fav.me/d3l7dtl I started to think on this story thanks to a |
For this story I had just the sex scene's idea and some a weak ideas. One evening, I explain to her my story and how I wanted to make it, and she started to said me, her ideas, good ideas. It all started from page 30 fav.me/d3kqihy. In this part Laura started to be involved the story. Every time I had a page, not all at the beginning, but the most importants, I showed to her before to complete them. And she was and is always there to give me help, with the story and with the graphics choices.
Slowly, this story - that mustn't had many page- started to be a collaboration between me and It became our "child" as always she loves call it. I always have ideas but Laura has many of those better than mine because she knows how to do a story plot. She were right on many things. One of all: about the fact to don't cut Sasuke's hair for almost the story. She thought that long hair should give a powerfull meaning, in relation of all the years that Sasuke spent in prison. For Laura, the long hair meaned that Sasuke accept all his mistakes, he should leave with them all his life, and the choice to not cut them means that he didn't forget which he was and when Naruto take off the prison Sasuke, he decided that his new hair should become the meaning of his pain, his sins, and the possibility for him, to change his life. To be something different. To become the Hokage's bodyguard, to be byside of Naruto.
But didn't had just a part on this , she always help me with the plot, the script and about how to do the pages in the better way. Sometimes she edit some things on the page , but more of times she says to me how to do the page best: which camera angles choose. How to organize the panel to do work them better. She is there everytime I make something in this story, in OUR story, everytime I need help , because yes, Reminiscence shouldn't be the story that you learnt to know without her professional help.
I wish write much more, but I'm not to use to write in english, it isn't my first language. Probably there are many grammatical mistakes, and yes, I could ask to someone to write the journal traslating it in english but there won't to be the same thing.
Laura, thank you.